Scary flist and HP fic teaser

[starsthatshine]

Is it just me that is scared to comment in some of my friends' LJs? :P I mean... so many of the people on my flist seem so....... I dont know... but they seem scary :P

In other news: The weather is.... naahhh... just kidding :)

I'm starting to write an HP fan fiction with Ron/Hermione, Harry/Draco and Hermione/Draco as pairings, which pairings that will be finale are yet to be decided. Anyway... The storyline is very cliché to me but will be awesome to write... I think. Anyway, Draco wants to bugg the hell out of Harry (my dirty mind can figure out other reasons as well but there are very limited appriciation for the Harry/Draco pairing) so he strikes a deal with Hermione to pose as his girlfriend. She does it in hope to catch Ron's attention.... I dont know if I should post it but I just write it for myself I suppose... And right now I wanna post a little teaser ;)

Teaser: Hermione Granger was anything but an odinary teenager, she was a teenger attending to an wizardry school outside of somewhere, she guessed it was outside Scotland but no one really knew for sure, not even someone as clever as Hermione.

Right now she was walking down the stairs to get to their Potions class, which was located down in the dungeons. She wasn't walking to it alone, thankfully, but with her best friends to escort her: Ron Weasley and Harry Potter.

Usually it was the name Harry Potter that made big 'wow's in everyone's mouths but not to Hermione. No, to Hermione Harry was just like any other teenager, but with a dark past... It was Ron who was the primary target of Hermione's attention.

His fire red hair and vague freckles on his nose made him look so adorable... Just if he wasn't so stobborn! Hermione loathed Ron today, she felt like flushing him down the toilet.

"I don't understand why they have to make us go to class with Slytherin..." Hermione's red-headed prince complained in a way that only her red-headed prince could.

"It's so they can throw in double torture in one class." Harry explained to Ron, smirking lightly. "Snape is the torture, Slytherin is just an extra."

"Next year, I'm gonna drop Potions." Ron declaired while Hermione rolled her eyes and reminded the red-headed prince once more that he couldn't.

Hermione suddenly felt a pang in her stomach as she saw a few Ravenclaw girls walk by and she saw how Ron looked at them, eyes filled with interest.

Silly me, thinking that he'd look at me... Hermione thought sadly to herself. She was too thin and her hair was too thick for any man to find her attractive.

What do you think?

Comments

[frostthepie.livejournal.com]

aww, i hope my entries aren't to scary to comment on lol

[aliasagent.livejournal.com]

No they arent... *hides* :P

[worldsofsmoke7.livejournal.com]

Love the idea for the fic! The teaser is great. I would totally read it.. especially being a H/D shipper at heart :)

~Nora~

[aliasagent.livejournal.com]

H/D forever ;) I'm doing a H/D is canon campaign in my head by the way ;) Really fun :)

[smilebacklovely.livejournal.com]

I get scared too, sometimes. Some people intimidate me. That's why I don't think I ever comment on yours. I always read it though, if that means anything. :[

[aliasagent.livejournal.com]

Sure it means somethhing... It's pretty much the same way I read your journal, I read but dont comment :P *lol*

*thinks* I should probably change that :P

[aliice.livejournal.com]

*rawr* Am I scary?

[aliasagent.livejournal.com]

Not at all *screams and runs for my life* :P

lol. I'm a genious at bad jokes :P

[heaven-eyes.livejournal.com]

LOL. That happens to me too i.e. about the scary f-list. I feel too scared to comment on a lot of people's posts :(

[aliasagent.livejournal.com]

LMAO. :P But you feel right at home here in my LJ right? :P

[heaven-eyes.livejournal.com]

Um yes.

[raspberryhats.livejournal.com]

I get scared too. But just rememebr, people will always love attention paid to them and if you put in effort people will usually put in effort back to you.

[aliasagent.livejournal.com]

That's true, but I'm such a chicken most of the times and have nothing really clever to add in anything so I usually make an mental comment :P

[ritinha.livejournal.com]

Loved the way the story was going and the brief plot you gave us. The story itself seemed really cool and you have a writting tallent; always so interesting (I've read some of the stories you made before).
Although I have to confess that I'm not so please with the way you keep reffering to Ron as 'her red-headed prince' Gree Arg! For that... I, putting it simple, HATE Ron/Hermione; but I'm willing to give it a go as this is going to have some Draco/Hermione relation (hopefully) or Draco/Harry (I wouldn't mind that either).

One question: Is it going to be PG-13, R, NC-17..? Which one?

[aliasagent.livejournal.com]

lol. You hate Ron/Herm... Well, there's a new thing for everything ;) I'm planning some Herm/Draco comedy and some Ron hysteria and some tones of Draco/Harry (still haven't decided about the romantic thing ;)). I'm gonna try to make it possible for many different people to read the fic, so of course people that hate Herm/Ron will be annoyed by the red headed prince reference while others will throw up over the Harry/Draco moments :P Each of it's own you know ;)

I have no idea which pairing I'll have so far... So far PG-13 but I might make it R before I'm done ;) I can't write NC-17 :P Well, I think I can write torture but nothing lovish :P

[ritinha.livejournal.com]

lol. True... Some people hate Harry/Draco and love Ron/Herm and, of course, are totally insane. j/k j/k (Ron/Hermione lovers don't hunt me down, please. lol)

But, despise the red head prince thinguie I'm gonna keep reading it. It's just THAT cool :D

[lostopenwindows.livejournal.com]

Hope my entries don't scare you... too much. :D

The teaser is great but the "red-headed prince" bothered me a little as well. Not because I hate R/Hr, in fact I support it and it was the first HP ship I liked... but mostly because of the fact that Ron being described as a prince by anyone (Hermione especially who, despite her caring for him whether it's platonic or romantic, is able to see his faults very clearly) makes me want to laugh. I love the guy and he has some great qualities, but I just can't see anyone admiring him in a "princely" way, friend or more. ;)

[aliasagent.livejournal.com]

lol... You've got a point there ;) A really good point :P Might change that ;) Thanks for the advice :D *huggies*

Btw, did you figure out what might be wrong with my site connection to my computer and everything? :) I've been trying to figure out some answers but no one seems to know

[yenetai.livejournal.com]

Sounds great Em, can't wait to read the rest! =D It's been a while since I read/wrote HP fanfic, nice to do it again, heh. :P

I hope I'm not too scary..? lol ;)