I'd love to read the extra piece , but anyways, I loved the way you work with subtle text, implying things without truly saying them. My favorite scene was the talk between Mohinder and Matt, when Matt realized (dude, he took to long to notice, even with psy powers!!) that Momo is all over Sylar, romantically or whatsoever... Elle's and Peter relationship was also great, she's not my favorite character, but I liked her in your fic!