ext_9449 ([identity profile] yaoi-anti-drug.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsthatshine 2008-01-04 10:43 pm (UTC)

MORE! XD! I love subtext, though I'd like for there to be more gay, but the Matt/Mohinder, Sylar/Mohinder, and Petrellicest is good enough for me! And I loved Elle in this, her voice just seemed utterly perfect. Wonderful job, and I definitely want more! ^_^

Sylar was an obsession, a parasite gnawing at his soul and he would never have peace of mind if he laid it to rest. <--I really liked this for some odd reason, it's just so true.

At first, she was lurking behind a corner, just out of sight, watching his fame as he watched over his brother. <--Shouldn't this be 'frame'? Just wanted to point it out, ^_^

He really was his father's son. <--this sentence just hit me for some odd reason. I mean, after all that's happened, he ends up running off to find his own obsession, just like his father, abandoning his child in the process. It just made me realize how much he really is like his father.

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