I love this new one, especially how you showed the breakdown of Ben and Molly's relationship because I thought it was written very believably. Poor Molly. Also, I loved that you added that sad moment at the end where Micah ignored her because it fit so well.
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Date: 2007-06-10 09:40 pm (UTC)